Haiku by Kim the night before the eclipse:
the soft suffocation of
a hot august night
earth heaves and tumbles with life
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one bat two bat fast bat gone
silent sonar song
masters of the inky night
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many paths are crossed today
astral planes above
we achieve totality
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Kim Smith 8/20/2017
Sep 02, 2017 @ 22:29:15
Japanese and Chinese art succeed in conveying so much in a few pencil lines or brushstrokes, as does your poetry in so few words. Thank you for sharing both.
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Sep 05, 2017 @ 15:05:45
Thank you so much for that, Maureen. I’m a little in awe of my husband after he spun these out to me. Effortless…
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